The fantastic Margaret Mahy Playground - Hayley

W.A.L.T. write a descriptive recount.

Yesterday the 16th of may 2016 we went to the fantastic Margaret Mahy playground. At the park there was a big gigantic slide up a hill. To get up the hill there was some things that you could hold on to to get up because it was so huge and steep ish.

Some people like me could get up without holding on to anything! We went on the school bus and on the bus it was super noisy.

I was in Nina's group with Hayley HB, Gloria, Kyla and Chloe T.

First we got out of the bus and lined up in our groups and waited for a bit then we went to go sit down on the blue mats to have our morning tea.

After that we went for a walk to the Gap Filler and played for about ten minutes to see if we could get any ideas for what we want at our new school in wigram. There was lots of obstacles there to play on.

Then we walked back to the playground and had lunch then we got to play well the juniors went for a walk as well.

Next the juniors got back and we all played together and had lots of fun.

Finally we all got back on the buses and I fell asleep on the bus. Then we got back to school and had some playtime and then we talked about the stuff we liked.

My favourite part was the two flying foxes, the big metal slide, the sandpit area and the trampolines. There were two flying foxes so you could race each other on them. I raced Adelaide for a bit. It was funny because Mr Barrow went on the flying fox and raced someone which wasn't Adelaide or I. I think he versed someone younger than Adelaide and I. I really wish I could go back to the playground.

I think that the Margaret Mahy playground was the best playground ever! I love it. Thank you to all the parents who gave up your work to help us be able to go. It was awesome!

Scpf site 61 Chris

S.C.P.F. Site 61

By Chris

WARNING MUST READ: this is a scary writing doc it's about keeping the world safe from MONSTERS!!

Chapter 1

Getting a job.

One day i was in Class-D the prisoners class but then it my name was called out of the most loudest speaker ever! The crazy speaker said Chris Chambers Class-D Member report to the MTF Commanding Officer now i went with a SCPF Security guard to his office.

Chapter 2

Being part of the MTF

Then the commander said hey there Chris you are now part of the Mobile-Task-Force and my new title is now Chris (MTF) (MVP) it was crazy xD and i was never un respected again!

Chapter 3

Geting are weapons

I was welcomed to the Mobile-Group and the Mobile Security two but the first thing I was told to go to was armoury to get a are weapons they were a P90,Cloak 17,Mp5 and that was all of them and the coolest part was me getting a heavy duty armour and heavy duty helmet and my IvI 1 Key card IvI 2 Key card IvI 10 Key card and that was all.

Chapter 4

Going in the Heavy Contaminant area

So when I got my stuff I went to the  Heavy Contaminant area and only the Mobile-Task-Force were the only Team who had access but the Mobile-Administrator and access to every room.

Chapter 5

Mobile-Administrator's Job

His job is to make the Mobile-Task-Force and the Mobile-Security even and when a SCP Test escapes he will sand all the alarms plus he gets to go to all the Mobile-Meetings with all the Administrators and  Commanders.

Chapter 6

Having lunch with all the Class-D Members

L went to go have lunch and when I got there PRISONERS were looking like they were going to take over the LUNCH ROOM But that would never happen 1 There were 40 Mobile-Security Officers and 80 Mobile-Task-Force People they were all geared up that's for sure!

Chapter 7

Killing one of my friends

Having to sadly Essu Acute one of my best friends when l was part of the Class-D :( but l wasn't shooting him or whatever they do l was still on the job so I never saw him again.

Chapter 8

SCP 991

So when I was in the lunchroom with the prisoners the hole Mobile-Group was could by Administrator First class said all  Mobile-Task-Force members immediately report to Heavy catamint SCP 991 right now so I rushed to the Heavy catamint and cell 991 when

L got there SCP 991 WAS GONE!!!

Chapter 9

They were gone

When we all found out that SCP 991 was gone the security went up and the mobile-Group went up two

But on that day lots of the security officers started to go missing and then we all seted up a trap and then we waited and waited then we heard a bang and a crash so we all went in are place's.

Chapter 10

Catching SCP 991

Then we got him so everyone stood up and aimed there P90's and Aug A1, Aug A2,Aug A3 and Aug HBAR were ready to shoot and then the MTF leader said FIRE!!! We all shoot and it was mayhem then SCP 991 was knocked out so we put him back into his cell.

Chapter 11

Getting Fired!

So l went to my MTF Cando and then when I was just about to get in my condo I was called and it said chris chambers is fired so I left the building for ever!

The end.

Nippers-Chloe

NIPPERS  

Article and photographs

By jill macGregor

Knowledge  

1.  didn't you know that there were junior surf clubs. 2.

2. I didn't that in the junior  surf  club they had to clean the beach.

Comprehension

They had to smooth out the ground for the lifeguards to clean the beach.

 

All about writing-Juleana

All About Writing

By Juleana Nacian

Writing is all about putting ideas into sentences and talking about what you did, when you did it, who you did it with, how you do it, and why you did it.These things help you explain your writing.

You can do it in a writing book, on a whiteboard, or if you have a google account, you can do it in docs. Writing can be about your favourite movie/book character, write about anything in your imagination.You can also draw a picture above your writing or below. When you are writing in a book, use a pen. But when you're drawing, use a pencil.

To make a very descriptive and accurate writing, you add adjectives.These little fellas are important to add. Adjectives are about making boring words into great words. For example, you could describe the word "good" like this: fantastically good, and that's how you do it! Isn't it wonderful!

There's another thing that's also important.Full stops and capitals. At the start of each sentence, there is always a capital! No capital is a stupendous fail.The last thing is the full stop.The full stop is always at the end of a sentence. If you can't find one at the end of a sentence, you are a big failure.You should never forget these things.

The last thing is to stay calm and focused so you can finish straight away. If you make a mistake, don't panic!

I love writing!

Extraordinary Earthworms - Nikita

Knowledge.1 .There are more than one thousand kinds of seaweed.2. The biggest seaweed in New Zealand can grow up to 70 metres high.3. The smallest seaweed is as small as your little finger nail.4. Seaweed is an algae that grow in the sea.                                                                                                                                                                             ComprehensionThis book is about undersea gardens it has seaweed,coral,fishthere is more than one thousand seaweed types in New Zealand the smallest seaweed in the world is the size of your little finger nail and the biggest seaweed is 70 meters high. Air bladders help to hold the blades upright in the water the blades are the leaves of the seaweed they take in sunlight to help the seaweed to grow.

Camping down the line week 8 Cody

Knowledge: List all the characters in the story and what they are.

girls

Mum and girls

boys

Dad baby and boy

Comprehension Retell the text in your own words. (At

least 4 sentences)

They were going camping when it was pitch black like this box. But they did not know they were right beside the railway tracks.They lit up the gas lamp and they had tea the twins put their lettuce on the ground.they went to bed.

In the middle of the night a train went past they thought they got run over but they didn't. The kids slept in the car.  

Application Draw a three frame picture strip of one part of this story. Include speech bubbles

Analysis Create a FLOW CHART of the main events in sequence - (there should be at least 6 idea

Synthesis- New Ideas Create a new front and back cover for the book. Give it a new title and write a short summary.

Sub-zero / Scorpion and Minecraft Kody

Sub-zero

(mortal kombat x)

By kody davison room 2

This  stimulating character description will discuss everyone's favourite mortal kombat character sub-zero.

Sub-zero is coloured… blue with specks of grey and  white hips. His fortifying hair is not to be shown people say he has white hair. His eyes glow white in the snow. His skin tone is very DARK white. His robe design is right sided lines heading towards his neck.

Sub-zero shares his blood with his loyal,trustworthy brother scorpion.

He loves defeating are characters in mortal kombat x. This character is well known for his strength and ability of ice strike. Sub-zero can freeze five enemies in 5 to 10 seconds!!!.  

When there is a fight Sub-zero can't resist joining it. He likes scorpion A LOT when it comes to brotherhood. He likes his actions but others don't.

Scorpion facts

Scorpion is a reptile and shares blood with his loyal and loved brother sub-zero. He loves his cabin full of spider-webs. Scorpion is half human and half reptile and calls himself scorpion for a reason he strikes poison everywhere. That is all i know about scorpion.

Minecraft facts

Herobrine does not exist on XBOX 360 and and some PLAY-STATIONS. Steve and alex have lots and lots of skins as well as star-wars , doctor who , stampy wolrd , skin packs 1 , 2 , 3 , 4 , 5 and 6 , beast skin packs and others. The creators of minecraft or mojang , microsoft and notch. That's all the time we have got together now i'll hand you over to the next page bye-bye!

Thanks for watching!!! :D

The delicious cookies-Miriana

W.A.L.T. write an accurate sentence with full stops and capitals.

The Delicious Cookies

By Miriana

Elizabeth was whisking her banana chocolate chip cookie dough when it splashed all over the kitchen. "Oh no!" Elizabeth said. She had to clean it all up. Then when she finished tidying up she made a new one. Then when she was finished she passed it to Jack.

Jack rolled the dough out as flat as a wall, then he passed it to Rachel.

Rachel used the shape cutters to cut the dough into shapes like beautiful love hearts, stars and  circles. Then she put the chocolate chip cookies into the steaming hot oven.

When it had finished cooking Rachel pulled it out of the oven and they all ate it all up. Yum!!!  

Omapere childern delighted - Brad

Omapere Children Delighted By New Playground.

Knowledge

1.The opononi area school were the first to use a brand new playground on Opononi's  waterfront.

2.The old playground at freese park on Omapere's waterfront had been showing its age and no longer met the needs of local children.

3.This new playground looks exciting I hope it will extend the bodies and minds of Omapere's young people mr carter said.

Prone to erosion means something very likely to be flooded and washed away

I think the author has written this page because the kids did really interesting with all the playground business

I rate this book 6.5/10 because they just mostly talked about playground's       

Margaret Mahy playground - Harry

Margaret mahy playground

On Monday we had a journey to the Margaret Mahy playground. My mum was helping with the parent help. Jen, Chris, Cody, Coby and Leo were my group. Then we walked a short distance to the yellow bus. I was really excited for this trip. It took awhile to get there but we made it. When we were there it took about 12 minutes for the line  to get ready. When we were ready we were going to this optical course. It was really fun there was mini golf and there was a piano. My group played both of the mini golf's. After that we walked back to the Margaret Mahy playground and we had something to eat. And after that we played on the playground. My group played on the gigantic slide and it was really fun.After that Chris Coby and i played on the flying fox we all had one go and then we went back on the big slid about the forth time i dashed down i landed on my sore it really hurt really bad I had to go too one of my teachers with the health bag. I showed her my sore and there was blood everywhere. I told my mum and she took care of me. When that was over we had lunch and i had homemade chocolate cake and i made it  myself. When that was over we played in the water park and i got my feet all wet.

Cookie Time - Kahciar

WALT:write an accurate sentence with full story and capitals.

Cookie Time.

By Kahciar Faafia.

1.AHH! Abby mixed all the sticky ingredients so fast it went everywhere on the sticky icky blue bench.

2.Benjamin rolled the dough like he was in his own world and rolling his life away.

3.Elizabeth cut the cookies so fast they didn't look like love hearts anymore.

4.Abby put the cookies in the steaming hot oven she even hurt her hand (OUCH). 14/14.

Margaret Mahy Madness Park-Shanix

              W.A.L.T. Write a descriptive recount

Margaret Mahy Madness Park

By Shanix

On Monday all of Sockburn School including me piled on the bus to go to Margaret Mahy's playground. We left at 9:30 in the morning. When we got there we had morning tea.

After morning tea we went for a walk to Gap Filler HQ. When we got there we had to listen to an instructor. When she finished talking we got to play for 10 minutes, so Micah played the piano.Then we did a parkour race. We did it the wrong way.

After the Gap filler, we went back to Margaret Mahy park of madness. We played for an hour I think. I was on a relaxing swing, then my leg got stuck under the swing and pulled a muscle and twisted my ankle. It hurt  a lot. After I had done that I went down the slide and fell on my face. So I went down the slide again but I was lucky this time and slid on my feet. Then we had lunch for about 30 minutes or so. Then we went on the flying fox. We raced each other then we went on the big slide. Bjanka went down it too. It is a dangerous slide - so be careful on the big slide.

                                    by Shanix Tapara

Margaret Mahy Playground - Charlotte

The Margaret Mahy Playground

On Monday 16th of May the whole entire school went to the Margaret Mahy playground. We took the bus to the Margaret Mahy playground and I was seated next to Nikita. And we got there at 10:20 and we got off and ate something and after that the juniors  played on the playground while the seniors walked to the HQ. where there are mini golf, piano, big ball, obstacle course's then after 10-20 mins we were going to go to the. Dance mat but we were a little late so the teachers decide not to go so instead we stayed there for another 10mins and when we walked back to the playground I could. smell coffee food and I could feel the breeze trying to make it rain when .we got back to the playground the Juniors went to the HQ. And it was time for the seniors got go on the playground and some adults on it to.

Name Poem - Oriana

ORIANA MARGARET TANIELU.

Oranges.

Running.

Ice-Cream.

Apples.

Netball fan.

Aotearoa.

Marvellous.

Animal lover.

Responsible.

Generous.

Awesome.

Reliable.

Excellent.

Tough.

Tantrum Sometimes.

Artistic.

Netball.

Ices.

Energetic.

Lover of the Margaret Mahy Playground.

Cookie Madness - Rieya

Cookie Madness

By Rieya

WALT:write an accurate sentence with full stops and capitals

Rachel started to energetically stir the gooey choco chip  batter into a dribbly mess while her long skinny arms absorbed her disgusting dribbly sweat.

Betty slowly rolled the choco chip batter while the crunchy chocolate chips crunched like a parrot crunching on a cracker.

Jesse sliced all the cookie dough into adorable valentine and christmas theme shapes.

Rachel finally put the delicious looking cookies in the hot desert like oven, finally  she took the deliciously smelling chocolate chip cookie out.

Ending comment:

They all went to get some whip cream and toppings for the cookies i was the only one there so I ate all the cookies! When they came back oh no………

Julian our cat ate all the cookies. Shh i blamed it on the cat.       

                                                                       

                                                         rating  (8\8)

Baking cookies too fast - Thomas

Baking Cookies Too Fast!

By Thomas Woermann.

Blurble! Abby had to bake 2 dozen chocolate chip cookies fast, so she turned the electric beater on to full SPEED!

Then she rolled the dough so fast that it almost fell off the sticky green bench.

Then she shaped the cookies so fast that the edges were crazy crooked.

Finally she was able to take them out of the oven and try one but they tasted like soap.

She had to do it all again only faster!

Character Description- Tukua

Introduction

Once there were a square sponge that lives in the mysterious sea and this sea sponge will inform the curious reader who this character is?

LOOKS LIKE

I look like a yellow jordans that lives in the sea i have holes in my body red rosy cheeks and little dimples sea blue eyes.

Actions

I like to annoy people  and Whenever i'm at work when i serve burgers i always dance just

for fun. I always go jellyfishing with my friend patrick.

Characteristics

I have sea coloured eye and i have a wide gap between my two big teeth and big smile on my face i'm short i look like i'm only a school student i wear a brown and white with a red tie i also always wear office shoes for cooking i wouldn't need them i'll make them dirty.

Conclusion's

This information report is for this character description will be announced a mystery person,characteristics,actions and looks like. Will be described to allow to the curious reader to make the informed regarding the hidden identity of the unknown character.

 

Fun At The Margaret Mahy playground-Genevieve

WALT:Write a descriptive recount

Fun At The Margaret-Mahy Playground

By Genevieve

On Monday I went to the Margaret-Mahy Playground with the whole school but sadly my little brother could not go there, because he ran across the road on Garvens!!! Any way I was thinking that he would have a good time anyway because he might get a new toy but then I stopped daydreaming. I saw that daddy parked right next to the school so I hugged daddy then I said goodbye to him, then got out of the car and waved at him.

I walked in the gates and went into breakfast club and had a milo, then it rained. Heaven said ow we can't go it's raining but I really wanted to go and  so did Trinity. I went into the rain and then saw Mrs Boswell. She said that we are pushing against the weather and that we are going. The school bell rang so then I went into the classroom and then sat down on the mat. Mrs Boswell did the role, then she told us who our parent guiders were. My parent guider was Sara which is Chloe W's mum. Kya and Reiya

were with Jo, Trinity's mum.The parent`s had five kids each.

After we got on  the buses the bus driver took us to the Margaret-Mahy Playground. When the bus stopped we got off.The teacher said that we could  have some morning tea. After that the teacher told us to line up behind our adult so we did then we walked to a place that lots of schools have been to and we played for a little bit.

After that we went back to the playground and I first went on the big slide a lot then I climbed on the spider web then I had a try at the trampolines then went to look at the sand pit. I had a drink. At lunch time there was an old man who made a little kid cry a lot. He was very creepy but he went away because Mrs Tanner told him to. A lot of people thought he was funny but he was not me, or Chloe or her mum. After that I went to the water park.

We all had lots of fun. We got back to school and we played for a little then we finally went home.   

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