Thursday, June 2, 2016

Buzzy Bee a choking Hazard - Kayla



Knowledge:List 2  fact from the text  
1. The buzzy bee toy is only known because of when Prince William came to New Zealand and had a buzzy bee toy.
2. Did you know that there are heaps of babies that are choking on the toy buzzy bee.

Comprehension
The main thing is that the people that make buzzy bees should make sure that no one can eat anything off of it and make it more safe so if babies but it in there mouth nothing would fall off and choke them. This story should be called the buzzy choke.

Application:Draw three frame picture strip
Babies normally put stuff in there mouth but
You should watch your baby everything it put in its mouth!.

If you buy this test it be for you let your baby have it because parts might fall off and your baby might put it in it mouth.

When you get a toy for your baby make sure that the toy is made so no wheels are going to fall off.


Analysis: Make a flowchart with at least 4 things in it


Synthesis: New ideas write one thing you would changes
The one thing that i would change is that the people that are buy it get to see how's it made and if it made correctly.
Evaluate: Make a judgement and rate the story
I rate this story 8 out of 10 because i don't like reading stuff that have babies choking and that the people who make them should make them better.

India By Shanix, Kieran and Franchesca


India

1.
2 population of India is 1,326,801,577
3.Pranab Mukherjee is the 13th and current leader of India since 2012 he was born in December 11, 1935.
4.The capital city of India is New Delhi
5.Mumbai is the most populated city India with 16,368,00 people.
6.The longest river of India is the Indus River.
7.Kangchenjunga is the highest mountain in India with (8,586 metres) and (28,126 feet).
9.
10.India is the seventh largest country by total  In west Bengal,India,cows must have a photo, in india they have more mobile Phones than toilets,one of India's most deadliest animals is the black scorpion.    


       By:Shanix, Franchesca and Kieran

The fantastic Margaret Mahy playground By Kieran


The fantastic Margaret Mahy playground

The Margaret Mahy playground is directly in the middle of the city of Christchurch by my dad's work. The playground has a big slide, a climbing hill and a big spider net longer than a bus. The playground is designed big so everyone can have fun and the adults can join in with their child.

The big slide is the feature of the playground because it uses a massive space and it is the most popular place. At the top of the slide it looks extremely steep and dangerous. When you go down it is super cold on a cold day but on a warm day it is unbelievably hot.

The climbing hill is designed with special lizards to help you climb it when it's slippery. The climbing hill is made out of rubber and on top of it is fake grass. The slide leads up to the peak of the hill where the big slide and two tunnel slides are. On a wet day it is slippery and on a warm day you can walk up it with no problems. The climbing hill looks enormously steep from the bottom but at the top it does not look as steep.

Within the boundaries of the magnificent Margaret Mahy playground the spider net sits right next to the big slide. The spider net is made out of thickened rope and metal hinges shaped as a sphere. Under the climbing net there are ropes with tiny platforms to stand on and some super uncomfortable hammocks.

Everyone goes to the Margaret Mahy playground because it has a ton of exciting things to go on. You can  have family picnics on the big hills in the Margaret Mahy playground. The Margaret Mahy playground is extremely safe and stable. I like the Margaret Mahy playground because it is humongous and safe.

The Fishing Boat. - Greg


The Fishing Boat.
By Gregory

"How's your swimmin'?" My Uncle asks me, his loud, firm voice echoes in my ear. "If I fall in the water, I won't drown!" I yell back, I swiftly slide myself down the towering ladder. We were at the fishing dock, I was lowering myself carefully into my Uncle's boat. If there was no boat there, I would be soaking, wet and swimming with the fishes in the seemingly infinite waters.

Safely on the boat, my uncle opened his boating log and wrote down something. (I wasn't looking… Or caring.) Once done he placed the log down, walked out onto the deck and told me a fact about the "pesky little" seagulls. It felt awkward… Very awkward. Jokes were and still are, my Uncles great talent. "I will now make a container MAGICALLY appear," he announces. Yet magic wasn't his great talent, I had an eccentric look on my face…

He then proceeded to pull a container out from under a trapdoor on the boat. I clapped sarcastically and said "WHOA, WHAT!" My uncle opened the container, and I nearly puked. It was full of literal… FISH MUCUS! No gloves on, he started filling a transparent bag full of said mucus to use as bait. That's why he said the fact about seagulls, the fact was that "the (pesky little) seagulls swoop in and steal fish bait thrown into the water."

Seagulls were squeaking and squealing around our boat, this could mean only one thing. They had smelt the fish bait! I was about to take cover until my Uncle scared them away. Hizzah! I have now embarrassed myself... AGAIN. I groaned in despair, 'till suddenly he asked me if I had wanted to see over 20 oysters caught in one cage. He then states, "I will now pull this magic rope..." I sighed. It was going to be a long… day.

Angry dad description - Micah





His eyebrows are cringed when he looks at you.
His head shook like a wrecking ball flying through the air.
He was holding his stomach like his heart was pounding like a frog
Blood vessels squeezed out of his head like a creek.
The terrifying face turned to a tomato Dad,s hand was clenched like he was going to punch me.
His finger was pointing at me like that they could fly. Blood was rushing through his veins like a red river.
His clothes turned to sweat every time he screamed my name.
Micah and Thomas