hi my name is tana i go to owairaka primary school i really liked your fish but you missed out the gills but you put alot of detail and effort into this work by the way you described
WOW, you have good describing words and you know what they mean as well. you should check out my blog, I have some pretty good stuff in it. you could do better if you write a story with your describing words in it. by Charlie :)
Hi my name Is Hibo I go to Owairaka school.I am in room 22 I really liked the spelling sentences and the end mostly and you put a lot of details in the slide show Blog you later,By Hibo from owairaka school
Good job i like you talk about fish but just saiding i did not like the colour and you miss out fish have gill to breath under the water.
Hi Isla, my name is Rawinia and I go to Owairaka District School and i really liked your catch of the day writing. I liked your spelling words that you had to write. I bet if it was a spelling test you would have gotten every single word write. I like how after, you wrote down the meanings of what the word actually means and for example "Mysterious" by reading your catch of the day writing actually taught me what "Ambitious", "Luxurious", "Infectious", "Malicious", "Glorious" and "Nutritious". Hope you can look at my class blog well that's it for me Blog you later!!!